2007-08-15, 16:22 | Link #8 |
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I would definitely make Naoruto's outfit much cooler with a better designe and get rid of those high water pants.They dont even reach down to his ankes. Orange and black with blonde hair is just screaming for a redesign. His outfit friom part one looked much better with the blue and orange design? His shippuden outfit Just doesnt work for me. I would also replace his current forehead protector with the one he woar in part one. The shippuden version is too big and long.
As for his justu, i would give him at one or two wind jutsus. Im tired of seeing him do "kagebunshin no jutsu" in EVERY damn battle. Something else would be nice. I would aslo change his FRS. I would not make it into the shape of a shuriken. To me that move so weird. The look of it and the fact thats it a shurinke that cant be thrown is a little stupid. Choji even commented on it rediculous it is. Speaking of him performing justus, i would allow him do rasengan with one hand instead of always using a clone. This way it would actually seem as though hes actually masterd the jutsu. In addition, in the beginning of Shippuden, instead of Team Gai, i would have have made Team Kurenai go to support Kakashi's team. This way during a battle, since kureani is pregnant, there would have probably been some foreshadowing. I would change a lot about the Hidan and Kakuzu arc. Like itsead of Asume dying, it would have been, Gia with Rock lee avenging him. Their connection is so strong it would have had more of an impact on the reader to see Lee push him self to the brink of death to avenge the only persn who ever had faith in him. That would have been an awesome story. I also wools have let Choji and Ino do more in that arc. They basically just stoo there most of the time watching Kakashi get beat up by Kakuzu. Oh yea, i would have also given some background on both Kakzu and Hidan so the audience could have known them better Their death also wouldnt have been so sudden either. I mean come peolpe, they were kind of easily beat. I also wouldnt let the sharingan be able to surpress the kyuubi. I mean Naruto needs some kind of advantage over Sasuke. |
2007-08-15, 18:23 | Link #11 | |
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But Kishimoto is not the problem. He has done okay outside of that horrible Naruto vs. Kakuzu fight. He knows more about his world and characters than any of us. It's the damn anime that is ruining Shippuden for us all. |
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2007-08-15, 18:46 | Link #12 | |
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2007-08-15, 19:06 | Link #13 |
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Join Date: Dec 2005
Age: 38
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Add 100x more drama. I'd keep these characters alive for a long time.
Naruto, Sasuke, Gaara, Temari, Neji, Tenten, Shikamaru & Shino. I would let the other guys/ladies eventually die heroic. To be a ninja shouldnt be fun or great. I'd add lots of bloody massacres. To give a little "Death Note" excitement... Instead of for all ages..i'd make it for 16+. Adding more romance, action and drama. I had this feeling right before the introduction of Itachi. It was awesome... Drama (Zabuza's & Haku's death) Action, Horror (Orochimaru) Horror (Gaara) Drama (Sandaimes death) I'd give this to the following character: Spoiler for Itachi:
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Last but definetly not least. Introduce alot more Ninja Wars and or battles. And skip the talkings during battles. I'd leave info and data for databooks and leave the explainations of techniques (and other similair things) out of the battlegrounds.
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2007-08-15, 19:19 | Link #14 | |
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I think he should have killed Chouji and Neji back at the Sasuke retrieval arc and redo a more epic battle with Naruto x Kazuku, all the rest is fine. Well... Maybe making Naruto a little cooler, he has been the under dog for too long. |
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2007-08-15, 19:38 | Link #16 |
what do i know
Join Date: Aug 2006
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make a better villain somebody who just creeps the hell out of the audience and is totally insane maybe have the villain kill somebody unlike what were stuck with now 2 death's and the characters who died didnt even matter
diffrent costume for naruto (bright orange isn't a good color for a ninja) more of a verity of moves (clones and rasangan are getting repetitive) show more of the other characters besides naruto |
2007-08-15, 20:01 | Link #18 | |
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That's why it's alot more dramatic when they die. That's why i mentioned some of them.
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2007-08-15, 20:35 | Link #20 |
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Join Date: May 2007
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-Better bad guys
-Naruto would not wear orange. Retard they should be able to see him -Girls would be a little less lame -Sharingan would not be that Uber. Uber it would be, just not that uber. -NO KAGEBUNSHINS (or a little less of them) |
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