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-Am!daMaru- · 2004-08-13, 07:58

Some character for an Rpg im making with friends...

First character - No name yet -

First Sketch
The head <__<
Third drawing.
Sword, and all the accessories..
First colored pic of teh guy. Scanned, and the colored on photoshop.

Second Character - Rika -

First drawing of her.
Second Drawing.
New Clothes

MrMoron · 2004-08-13, 09:32

Cool beans, there's a gunblade 'n all. What kind of RPG are you making? A computer game or something?

-Am!daMaru- · 2004-08-13, 09:34

Well it will be a computer game, a "fantasy" like game.

And it looks like a gunblade? its not supposed to

... <__<

Nezumi · 2004-08-13, 09:47

Man youve done a wonderful job whit the details of the clothing, this is exelent. Its kind of obvious that you were inspired by Final Fantasy, well looks like it rhou

Wonderful job mate, keep it up!

Kiva128 · 2004-08-13, 11:17

I like the colouring job on the first guy. Good job on that one.

Btw, you wouldn't have happend to play phantasy star IV where a character was named Rika, would you?

.gaara · 2004-08-13, 11:26

well it's good start. the figures and the relation of the body are correct.

when you sketch, try to keep light lines first. when using dark outline try to do it fast and simple. it dont necessarily to be bold and thick if you get what I mean.

-Am!daMaru- · 2004-08-13, 19:46

Yea i get it

Im still not used to draw lightly first, i must learn that first. :P

And yea, i was a bit inspired by FF series, but i never played Phantasy Star, i thought of this name and saw it was good so i took it ^^ ^^.

puffpuff · 2004-08-13, 20:28

Really nice!
I like them!!! But I kinda miss the eyes on the coloured guy... I know the hair´s hideing them, but anyway... I like the colouring!

-Am!daMaru- · 2004-08-16, 07:16

Ok another one.

Tim

Shoeshefied · 2004-08-16, 08:25

yea, i agree on the color, looks greatt, = T..

.gaara · 2004-08-16, 14:38

another great one. you've got very good sense of body structure and human anatomy.

as I mentioned before, if you able to keep the line simple and clean it would really improve alot both on the visual side and the whole artwork

-Am!daMaru- · 2004-08-17, 13:09

thx a lot.

Im practising on keeping simple line, its not easy,.but ill do my best ^^.

More comments or advices ?

Shoeshefied · 2004-08-18, 00:58

hm....mmm, well the coloring is awesome. Maybe the hair needs some sharp end points and becomes hairlines. (dont know how to put it in words ... the rest is fine keeppp it up!)

-Am!daMaru- · 2004-08-18, 07:20

Yea i see what ur saying, next time itll be better

2004-08-13, 07:58	Link #1
-Am!daMaru- Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Mauritius Age: 34	Am!~s Art Thread Some character for an Rpg im making with friends... First character - No name yet - First Sketch The head <__< Third drawing. Sword, and all the accessories.. First colored pic of teh guy. Scanned, and the colored on photoshop. Second Character - Rika - First drawing of her. Second Drawing. New Clothes

2004-08-13, 11:17	Link #5
Kiva128 Kairin-chan's #1 Fan Artist Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Canada	I like the colouring job on the first guy. Good job on that one. Btw, you wouldn't have happend to play phantasy star IV where a character was named Rika, would you? __________________ My New Site http://www.azuremidnight.com Summer Kairin Drawing! http://forums.animesuki.com/showthre...44#post3086844

2004-08-13, 09:32	Link #2
MrMoron Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Finland Age: 36	Cool beans, there's a gunblade 'n all. What kind of RPG are you making? A computer game or something?

2004-08-13, 09:34	Link #3
-Am!daMaru- Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Mauritius Age: 34	Well it will be a computer game, a "fantasy" like game. And it looks like a gunblade? its not supposed to ... <__<

2004-08-13, 09:47	Link #4
Nezumi Shinigami Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Unknown Age: 34	Man youve done a wonderful job whit the details of the clothing, this is exelent. Its kind of obvious that you were inspired by Final Fantasy, well looks like it rhou Wonderful job mate, keep it up!

2004-08-13, 11:26	Link #6
.gaara i'm in love --- :O Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: L o n d o n Age: 39	well it's good start. the figures and the relation of the body are correct. when you sketch, try to keep light lines first. when using dark outline try to do it fast and simple. it dont necessarily to be bold and thick if you get what I mean.

2004-08-13, 19:46	Link #7
-Am!daMaru- Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Mauritius Age: 34	Yea i get it Im still not used to draw lightly first, i must learn that first. :P And yea, i was a bit inspired by FF series, but i never played Phantasy Star, i thought of this name and saw it was good so i took it ^^ ^^.

2004-08-13, 20:28	Link #8
puffpuff Fallen Raven Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: in the chaos between life and death. Age: 34	Really nice! I like them!!! But I kinda miss the eyes on the coloured guy... I know the hair´s hideing them, but anyway... I like the colouring!

2004-08-16, 07:16	Link #9
-Am!daMaru- Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Mauritius Age: 34	Ok another one. Tim

2004-08-16, 08:25	Link #10
Shoeshefied Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: EST Age: 38	yea, i agree on the color, looks greatt, = T..

2004-08-16, 14:38	Link #11
.gaara i'm in love --- :O Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: L o n d o n Age: 39	another great one. you've got very good sense of body structure and human anatomy. as I mentioned before, if you able to keep the line simple and clean it would really improve alot both on the visual side and the whole artwork

2004-08-17, 13:09	Link #12
-Am!daMaru- Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Mauritius Age: 34	thx a lot. Im practising on keeping simple line, its not easy,.but ill do my best ^^. More comments or advices ?

2004-08-18, 00:58	Link #13
Shoeshefied Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: EST Age: 38	hm....mmm, well the coloring is awesome. Maybe the hair needs some sharp end points and becomes hairlines. (dont know how to put it in words ... the rest is fine keeppp it up!)

2004-08-18, 07:20	Link #14
-Am!daMaru- Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Mauritius Age: 34	Yea i see what ur saying, next time itll be better