SOTM 2009 - November (Versus!) - Entry Thread

[JRendell]

Final Entry

[LKK]

@ Manju: I would start the glint running up the blade at the place where the static white glare hits rather than lower at the hilt of the sword. The other option is to start the glint at the static glare location and run both up and down from that point. As it is now, it doesn't look natural to me. The sides look at little empty to me. Congrats on getting slices to work for you!

[ganbaru]

This will be my Final Entry

Strangelly it's the first time than I didn't include text on a Sotm sig, not even as a background element

[Beruko08]

My final entry

[ganbaru]

eh Beruko08 , I can' see it.

[Beruko08]

Originally Posted by ganbaru

eh Beruko08 , I can' see it.

I just deleted the previous one due to its size and re-uploaded. I think you can see it right now
Or the link doesn't work with you?

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by sayinterry

Ok. Since i dont feel that the kampfer sigs are good enough (ill just leave them as freebies)

I hope i can get some C&C please. 1 Render 1 text not too flashy

V1



V2

The image looks totally deformed, squished and without proportion. I would give tips on how to work it but I feel I must ask you first which progranm are you using to make it?

Originally Posted by capture

My try for the SOTM... >_< (need C&C) [actually there are 2 more pairs I'm working at and this was the 1st one to finished
1st draft




2nd draft

My main problem here is that the sig has too many elements that it's confusing I would get rid of the pop-up boxes with the faces of Nanoha and Fate and work only with the center image.

Originally Posted by White Manju Bun

Very VERY rough 1st draft, I already see a few things I need to fix. Mostly want to know if the animation fits, does it flow? Im not loving how InuYasha and Sessh-sama look in this image either, I tried making it better but appears I failed. Like I said, rough, rough draft. (yes I know there is no border)



On the brightside I kinda figure out slicing

The animation is good, perhaps it needs a border.

[vandakiara]

this may not look like it but it's a fight ^-^"

jeez, me and violent things don't get along D:



so... C&C anyone?

[ganbaru]

vanndakiara Why the blurr around the mini-hakkenko ?

[katiemirmo]

Originally Posted by vandakiara

this may not look like it but it's a fight ^-^"

jeez, me and violent things don't get along D:



so... C&C anyone?

the blurry part is kinda confusing..I dunno if it's her hand or what..

[vandakiara]

hmm ok got it... somehow I erased the original layer before merging with the blurry part so I couldn't fix it very well but let me know if this works better:

v2

[Beruko08]

Originally Posted by vandakiara

hmm ok got it... somehow I erased the original layer before merging with the blurry part so I couldn't fix it very well but let me know if this works better:

v2

Let me guess, is that Reimu's leg which Marisa's punching to?

[Miko Miko]

Thoughts?

[vandakiara]

Originally Posted by Beruko08

Let me guess, is that Reimu's leg which Marisa's punching to?

uhm, yes it is i had to change reimu's location or else she wouldn't fit the sig

@Miko Miko - love the sig but keiichi is a bit too blurred out... and the text needs serious changes D:

[Risa chan]

few tries:

[PreSage]

I wasn't too sure whether I would enter this but a friend said to throw it in anyway. So here it is, my first version.



I feel that it needs something more but can't figure out what. It was already suggested to tone down the aura a bit, which I haven't done yet, but any other C&C?? Much appreciated as always.

[katiemirmo]

Originally Posted by Miko Miko

Thoughts?

I like it, although you may want to lessen the lighting a bit..

Originally Posted by Risa chan

I like this one more..although..I think that the things at the right side is a bit out-of-place..

[risingstar3110]

Originally Posted by capture

My try for the SOTM... >_< (need C&C) [actually there are 2 more pairs I'm working at and this was the 1st one to finished
1st draft




2nd draft

I like the first one ^^
... but the picture in the center is a little bit small IMO

@sayinterry: I agree that it looks deformed, squished and without proportion

[Cyz]

^ My take on the theme.

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by vandakiara

hmm ok got it... somehow I erased the original layer before merging with the blurry part so I couldn't fix it very well but let me know if this works better:

v2

Let me guess, you cut the iamge and moved the upper girl below so you could have both girls in the sig?

I presume the answewr is yes, well, the image is well merged with this cut but it makes it a bit confusing. It looks as if the lower girl had ripped apart the leg of the
upper girl. XP

Originally Posted by Miko Miko

Thoughts?

I'm not such fan of that text and the image is a bit to bright.

Originally Posted by Risa chan

few tries:

I would go with this one. I just found the squares at the right a bit unecesary.

Originally Posted by PreSage

I wasn't too sure whether I would enter this but a friend said to throw it in anyway. So here it is, my first version.



I feel that it needs something more but can't figure out what. It was already suggested to tone down the aura a bit, which I haven't done yet, but any other C&C?? Much appreciated as always.

I really like the bg, great work on text and render merging. Good work!

Originally Posted by Cyz

^ My take on the theme.

My main problem is the bg, perhaps the render is juts not merged veery well with it.