2008-10-06, 19:34 | Link #82 |
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Yes, that's actually based off a similar scene I had in mind for a Naruto fanfic I had written and posted a while back on FanFiction. Shame I deleted my profile, I might just try rewriting the first chapter when I have free time, apparently I had a knack for writing action...
Anyway, the scene itslf would have been set in an alternate time line where Naruto and Sasuke first met at around age eleven on the night of the Uchiha Massacre(it's heavily AU'd in case your confused). I'll warn you when I get around to re-posting that story so yo can get better details, but they end up with a much stronger bond than in the canon story. At any rate, one night after the massacre, Naruto comes knocking on Sasuke's door, garbed in all black, arrying a spare "sneak-suit," and shouldering a duffle bag. He immediately tosses Sasuke the spare outfit and calls him out for a little "operation." Sasuke follows out of a mix of insomnia and curiousity. Said "operation" ends up involving a lot of sneaking around and eluding ANBU, something Sasuke finds Naruto is quite skilled at, culminatin with the eventual infiltration of the Hokage Tower. It's here that Naruto reveals his "Master Plan." Opening the bag, Sasuke gives it's contents a breif once over, looking to Naruto for some kind of confirmaion. The resulting nod from the jubilent blonde causes an odd response from the cloaked Uchiha, a deranged grin dances over his features... The Hokage is left in a state of awe the following morning. The night watch ANBU bow their heads in utter disgrace, but just high enogh to still have sight of the spectacle before them. Spray-painted across the roof reads the phrase, "Keep the Fire Burning," the text circling around a certain orange swirl with the crest of the Uchiha clan marked at it's center. And that would have been about chapter four... |
2008-10-06, 19:51 | Link #84 |
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Glad to see you enjoy.
I'm feeling rather hyped now, think I'll try and rewrite what I remember of that story of mine. Alright, let's get this writer's passion burnin'! |
2008-10-07, 13:44 | Link #86 | |
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For I have the passion thet will never fade... The passion... OF YOUTH!! |
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2008-10-07, 14:57 | Link #90 |
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Then you'll love this idea:
A filler where Gai sensei explains that he was the second-choice for Itachi's mission to destroy the Uchiha. (Should Itachi fail, or refuse, or any reason not accomplish his task). It further explains that his thick eyebrows are the reason: they neutralise the sharingan by drawing attention away from his eyes. In short, it is revealed that Lee is immune to all of the effects of Sharingan. |
2008-10-10, 08:30 | Link #92 | |
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Tell me you're not referring to chapter 2' "sparring session"... |
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2008-10-14, 19:21 | Link #96 | |
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lol! jk, jk! Seriously though, a beach episode? Didn't we learn our lesson when theytried it in Avatar? Then again, that was one of the most hilarious things... |
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2008-10-14, 21:29 | Link #97 |
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This is just how id like the upcoming chapter to unfold
Kakashi uses MS on deva pain... but just as deva realizes its power.. another pain (animal pain) stabs kakashi from behind... deva pain goes to perform the finishing blow...A puff of smoke appears and its Gamakichi with naruto standing on top (lawl).. Kichi performs a katon jutsu.. and naruto amplifies it with a new fuuton jutsu (just basic wind realease like pa toad)... animal pain summons hungry ghost in front of deva to extinguish the jutsu...*flash back to pa telling naruto how the bodies see wat eachother see's*.. knowing this naruto decides he has to separate them.. naruto summons the esophagus of the fire breathing toad trapping the animal pain inside... as the flesh tries to engulf the pain body hes fighting it off.. but eventually it traps the pain... naruto charges forward performing rasengan... the mountain toad disperses... naruto screaming who's next... but deva pain touches the animal pain and it resurrects...as naruto sees this.. he performs Kuchiyose no Jutsu Pa toad appears.. "he says.. so im needed all ready eh? " chapter finishes.. next chapters "The return of the sage (hermit mode)" Lol o well.. i was bored...I think most of this is due to that fact Spoiler for manga:
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2008-10-15, 06:49 | Link #98 |
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All in all, I miss the flashbacks in Naruto, totally. I want to know more about the past. For me, the past, the 1st and 2nd Hokage and the time when the 3rd was still young, the great ninja wars and the past of the differnet ninja villages is more interesting than what we get to know now...
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2008-10-15, 08:42 | Link #99 | |
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2008-10-15, 08:52 | Link #100 | |
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