(R-18) Yume to Utsusu no Naka de Nandomo Okasareta Shimai-tachi

[rantaid]

The way of netorare is always the nicest would be first to fall. Could it be glasses with long black hair? I meant the one who is portrayed as the maternal and adolescent type usually with big breast. Second would be the girl with strong willed character, third would be agonizing imouto who plead for unequal exchanges (yamete! Oneechan tachi ijimenaide!)

First would be Grace Stolen, second would be Raiza Stolen and last Shirley Stolen... that is what i meant.

ps. I am answering translator question. Who knows i am wrong...lol

[dragon1412]

Originally Posted by tsunade666

What title for incest? I prefer blood relatives and ntr >>>>>>>>> twincest > incest. There is another ntr from what I remember here in this forum. The elf/boss is ntr by the enemy while the girl is using the protag as hostage. Have high standard for ntr but just generally like ntr.

tsunade.....yo...you....you are actually part of the NTR faction all this time ????

[rantaid]

@dragon1412

He is. Sometimes he give good recommendation

ps. Btw seems i was right lol.

[Ruki0089]

By the way, I'm not part of any ntr faction...

[tfate]

Originally Posted by miyosotis

First of all a warning: This is R-18 and NTR. If you don’t know what NTR is you might want to get out of here before you fall into the darkness and never get out.

Specifically this is netorare (MC gets his harem stolen from him) and not netori (MC steals girls from others).

To those who have already fallen like me, I hope that my translation is sufficient enough for you to enjoy this novel.

Releases will be slow since I have a job, but I’ll release chapters in parts as they get translated.

That warning saves a lot of pure souls. Thank you for that and goodluck TL-ing this novel.It may not be my taste but i hope other people would enjoy it....Flies awaaaaay~

[jmcu17]

You know, you guys can be really weird sometimes.

Originally Posted by tsunade666

What title for incest? I prefer blood relatives and ntr >>>>>>>>> twincest > incest. There is another ntr from what I remember here in this forum. The elf/boss is ntr by the enemy while the girl is using the protag as hostage. Have high standard for ntr but just generally like ntr.

The story is called Blood Rebellion. I have the thread bookmarked in my DANGER folder.

[Kaito Yamakage]

Originally Posted by jmcu17

You know, you guys can be really weird sometimes.


The story is called Blood Rebellion. I have the thread bookmarked in my DANGER folder.

You can delete it, that series was removed by the author.

[evilgenius]

Originally Posted by Kaito Yamakage

You can delete it, that series was removed by the author.

ehh whyyyy i wanted more revenge, what happened?

[jmcu17]

Originally Posted by Kaito Yamakage

You can delete it, that series was removed by the author.

Doesn't hurt to have it though. I think I'll keep it around just in case it gets a light novel release.

[senjiro]

Uh?
I was expecting some harem lucky sukebe.... And i found a green hat boy?....
*run away at match speed*

[Phantomlurker]

Is this the debauchery thread? If yes, we need more NTR. Sure, most of the time I hate it, but it makes for a good change. I also agree with Rantaid about the need for a good love story before the NTR hits. What's the point if you can't feel the despair?

[miyosotis]

Originally Posted by Phantomlurker

Is this the debauchery thread? If yes, we need more NTR. Sure, most of the time I hate it, but it makes for a good change. I also agree with Rantaid about the need for a good love story before the NTR hits. What's the point if you can't feel the despair?

Although the romance might not be that developed compared to NTR VNs which spend hours in the love story part, this novel will still show the development of the romance part (a harem to be exact). So there will definitely be that turning point to despair.



I realize that people might be having high expectations since this is the first (I think) NTR web novel to be translated. Do note that this novel only has 16 chapters, so the pacing will be quite fast.

If this novel is not to your tastes, you might want to check out other ntr novels that I found which you might like - https://ntrholic.wordpress.com/2016/04/24/ntr-webnovel-list/

But if you happen to enjoy it, then I'm glad

[wuhugm]

^You are out of your mind dude...

Repent

[travelingbum]

ya the first title on the list is just a NTR play...... and that there is a happy end keyword so....
also the world being a mix of magic(fantasy) and science.

does his party even have an objective anymore...

[rantaid]

@miyosotis

well relax, even i do admit i was a bit harsh.... and i know that it was mere 16 chapters from raw.... the problem was with the author who is too ambitious. trying from the hard way.

If he already envisioned this for a short chaptered story, he should have built his story from well established foundation; like for example the osananajimi trope where the pair of lover is already believed to share a strong emotional bond, or brocon imouto who spent her whole life worshipping her brother, an already established pair of lover/partner; any kind of relationship which the readers already filled on their mind even without explicitly shown how deep their bond with it, so we will have fun seeing their bond be cruelly destroyed, trampled and pissed on while we the reader ate popcorn while jerkin in our merkin to the whole process.

How good it shall turn out to be always depended on the author skill in crafting words and sentence persuassive enough to let the readers immersed in the world he tried to narrate to us. it doesn't have to be shown explicitly like a technical manual instruction of love making but enough to build the reader's curiosity, empathy and even for sympathy:

like Rowling's "Always" from Snape and Hemmingway's "Baby socks for sale, never used" story.

on the other hand, why i personally insist the importance of strong foundation of NTR by means of 'pure, beautiful and romantic love story where their bonds can be felt and empathized' was to invoke the most beautiful feeling when those pure and innocent stuff be destroyed into shattering fragments, where we are too helpless to stop them. Stunning yet eerily breathtaking.

“Fear is the path to the dark side. Fear leads to anger. Anger leads to hate. Hate leads to suffering.” Yoda says.... Yet, suffering itself was an act of selfless love.

and all of those quality you can find in love, you can find in NTR. just like what Yoda says.

ps. also the sex thing seems good from the surface. i like the way Grace was getting Stolen.

[tsunade666]

There are only 4 chapters translated. Is the cheating/stealing already starting in those 4 chapters? If its only 16 chapters. I would probably just wait until all chapters are translated before reading it in one go.

Btw rantaid.I just read a good ntr doujin yesterday. Its already part 2 and the first one was released in year 2014. Fork in the road is the title with mashiraga aki as author.

[rantaid]

@tsunade666

oh, fork in the road. it is nice painful one. the previous works of the author had more hurtful feeling i recall. try to sample it. but honestly like Ser Merryn Trant the 'Wise' says; every girls above 12 years old are just 'too old'. Girl already in working age lose their innocence easier which made them a bit hard too break. while younger girl who are simply too ignorant and naive prone to break easier... much entertaining to watch..

pity few author able to grasp this when i want to learn about it.

ps. btw it is at the 4th chapter we get to see the NTR via ultimus scarpia. i read the gist of it to know that Grace Stolen will be stolen via some suspicious doctor or what who threatened either her or her sister. and as usual good foolish girl, she is the first one.

[pedrojames]

can someone spoil me hows the end, thanks in advance

[GodTurtleOm]

Oh, I read this as it was coming out with machine translations, because as I've stated earlier, I like NTR in porn, but dislike it in nonporn.

So, spoilers, from what I can remember:

Spoiler for Mainly the ending:

Antagonist screws both older sisters, while making youngest sister into a slut inside of a dream. At some point, the dream/sleep magic on the sister is released, and their family has a celebration for her recovery. Antagonist takes Sharley to his place, NTR sex, it's revealed that he was always a demon, Sharley becomes a demon, they fly away together. MC actually hooks up with both of bad guy's servants at the end, and the two older sisters again.

Edit: yeah, MC finds out about everything, the whole demon transformation and thing happened right in front of him, and she blew him off. (both metaphorically and literally, but not sexually) Yeah, I don't think anyone knew the antagonist was a demon, including his slaves/maids. At the end I think MC and Raiza? and maids are going to search for Sharley in some attempt to convert her back to human? He reconciles with the sisters.

[pedrojames]

he finds about the ntr ? and how he finds ? hows his relationship with each sister in the end ?