Syosetsuka ni Narou Discussion Thread

[wuhugm]

Originally Posted by guyy

What kind of sex and with who? I skipped World Teacher because there's a "がっつかないハーレム" tag which I thought meant the MC is just an impotent faggot who ignores his harem's advances on him

Happy sex with Emilia

[guyy]

Originally Posted by wuhugm

Happy sex with Emilia

In what chapter or volume is this?

[wuhugm]

Originally Posted by guyy

In what chapter or volume is this?

Arc 12 Chapter 85

after Emilia conquered her trauma in her hometown

not explicit like Junai, but it's great already for a narou~

[guyy]

Originally Posted by wuhugm

Arc 12 Chapter 85

after Emilia conquered her trauma in her hometown

not explicit like Junai, but it's great already for a narou~

So がっつかないハーレム = only one girl in the harem wins and the rest are just useless extra?

[wuhugm]

Originally Posted by guyy

So がっつかないハーレム = only one girl in the harem wins and the rest are just useless extra?

Funny u said that when I just reached the point when he boinked another girl

Gattsukanai means being greedy though...
it's not the negative form of Gatsuku, but the "have to be" form of it

[guyy]

^Oh alright. That sounds wrong to me though

I think it is referring to the fact that it took him a whole 12 arcs to have a taste

[wuhugm]

Actually I felt wrong too~ teehee~

It seems it actually means Temperate/Moderate Harem referring to the size of the harem... since I've already reached chapter 90 and only 3 harem members... that's small compared to other harem series

[SlendermanHD]

Originally Posted by tonyorobsky

Been a whil since the last time I was here...

Looks like there are a lot of "trash" wn on narou these days. More than 20 pages looking for something interesting, and less than 5 positive results...

I like action/adventure with fantasy and/or sci-fi, better if there is romance, and even better with harem (but please spare me the pussy mcs).

Problem is, there is too many gamey fantasy worlds with mr nice guy hypocrites against slavery that buy slaves to treat them like friend/family and not the servants they are, fuckin goody 2 shoes that don't think enough about the consequences of their actions, too many hero summons and demons enemies...

And 95% of sci-fi stories are about VR games...

Spent enough time on Royal Road, I guess it's time to have a look at Fiction Press again...

Well in royal road age of heroes its quite good except for the grammar part but still its something you can read and enjoy.

[Wurstorff]

Alright, I remembered something interesting. It's 18+, though, plot-focused and the sex is entirely skippable if you're not into it.

Spoiler for 18+~~:

Academy Battle - Rape Girl (Spoiler: no rape happening)

She's a masochistic ESPer with very visual rape fantasies.
He's secretly a mind reader who can't keep her out of his head.
Together, they're hilarious.

Despite the name, this is actually a lovecomedy. No, I'm not kidding. Back when I read it, I remember laughing tears because it was so great. Not just the comedy, it has an actual plot, too.

No harem, no OP, just pure love, comedy and plot.

Edit: No otherworld, no reincarnation, no virtual reality, btw.

[Xellos-_^]

Originally Posted by tonyorobsky

Been a whil since the last time I was here...

Looks like there are a lot of "trash" wn on narou these days. More than 20 pages looking for something interesting, and less than 5 positive results...

I like action/adventure with fantasy and/or sci-fi, better if there is romance, and even better with harem (but please spare me the pussy mcs).

Problem is, there is too many gamey fantasy worlds with mr nice guy hypocrites against slavery that buy slaves to treat them like friend/family and not the servants they are, fuckin goody 2 shoes that don't think enough about the consequences of their actions, too many hero summons and demons enemies...

And 95% of sci-fi stories are about VR games...

Spent enough time on Royal Road, I guess it's time to have a look at Fiction Press again...

that is actually very human. Ask people in Western Nation and everyone is against slavery but how many think where and how their clothes, shoes and toys are manufacture?

And not everyone is capable or want to Fredrick Douglass or Spartacus.

[Okashira]

I don't remember who mentioned this one to me; but after a long time in the back burner, I decided to check Goblin Kingdom / ゴブリンの王国

Things that I like :

- Relatively serious and dark atmosphere without going overbroad. Fights are bloody and never easy.
- There is congruency with the major goal of the story and steps taken towards it.
- Random mechanics are not magicaly created or discovered out of nowhere to make the MC look good.

Spoiler:

- Guy dies and reincarnates as a goblin monster, starts with the typical monster stuff that all of these stories have near the start.
- Harsh eat or be eating world. Goblins are bottom feeders even after increasing their abilities a lot, that's why fights are always tough
- The main core theme of the story is free will, and is tied to "who you are"; the MC bumps into plenty of factors that hinder his free will; such as "his monster instincts" trying to take over his human consciousness. He later gets a "berserk" type of skill to boot.
- There are level and evolution features, but you can't evolve outside your species (so no silly thing like a guy evolving to demi god even though he doesn't have a single drop of divine blood flowing in his veins).
- The MC is a no nonsense guy who decided to embrace his animal instincts and aim for the fattest fish in the pond and ergo a kingdom (and thus, the title).

Spoiler for skimming through text as ususal, so probably mistakes included:

- Divine blessings work by making people God's pawns; as they are to act in benefict of the God that gives them, the Gods can insert "impulses" unto the targets of the blessings so that they do their biding.
- The 'heroine' is a priestess of the healing goddess that the MC kidnaps, said goddess is the sworn enemy of the goddess that tries to control the mc; so the MC usually recieves impulses in the lines of "trample her, conquer her, kill her" which the he fights off.
- The heroine doesn't seem to get too many impusles, but that's probably because she doesn't rebel unlike the MC and she is following the doctrines that someone who gets her blessings have to study. Her consciousness was once completely over-ridden by her goddess, though......
- The MC and priestess have seen their future, and they are destined to kill each other, apparently re-enacting the war of the gods that occured in older times; the MC vows to keep the priestess safe and sound as that represents perfectly his determination to spit on fate and to be the one who determinates his own destiny.
- Even though that last bit sounds romantic, there is no love between them as of early first arc. At best, there is an uneasy friendship between them since she is pretty aware that there is a big line between monsters and humans and she is a captive after all.

Even with the revelation, the heroine is still unaware that she won't live happily unless she fights off her fate; but I expect her to gain some determination if / when she falls for the MC. There is also other gods, I expect their blessed tools-kids trying to get in the way eventually.

[mufarasu]

Is there anything good on fictionpress? Besides Mother of Learning obviously. I've tried searching around it before and couldn't find anything decent. The mature category itself was a dissapointment since it was mostly sex filled writing.

[Breimn]

Originally Posted by Breimn

For english FANTASY WN i suggest this one if you want something funny
This Onii-chan got Summoned to a Diffferent World
http://www.royalroadl.com/fiction/2416/#review-25316
If you want something serious
A hero s war
https://m.fictionpress.com/s/3238329/1/A-Hero-s-War
Mother pf Learning
https://m.fictionpress.com/s/2961893...er-of-Learning
They are the only 3 i really like. After that i read some dungeon stories to pass the time.

Try these mufarasu

[PhilippeO]

Reccomendation section from tvtropes have many fictionpress writing on it

http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.ph...cs/WebOriginal

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/219491...of_the_Sun_Sin
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2094105/1/Nocte_Yin
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/1703141/1/Magicademy

[mufarasu]

These seem interesting.
Thanks I'll try them out, and thanks for the TV tropes link.

[Xellos-_^]

自称贤者弟子的贤者吧

Anyone has info on this? English name, summary etc.

The Chinese ln site i went put up vol1-3 on this. The summary is just bare bones. Virtual MMROPG, Guy player in real life became a cute girl when transported into the game world.

[Wurstorff]

Originally Posted by Xellos-_^

Anyone has info on this? English name, summary etc.

The Chinese ln site i went put up vol1-3 on this. The summary is just bare bones. Virtual MMROPG, Guy player in real life became a cute girl when transported into the game world.

She professed herself the wiseman's ... disciple or whatever the English/Engrish title was. Based on a JP WN, originally. Kenja no Deshi wo nanoru Kenja, +/-. Working off the top of my head here.

Guy played a VRMMORPG until his character ("muscle-gandalf") was famed as one of the ... 8 or 9 sages, the Sage of Summoning. While messing with a character-remodelling item, he falls asleep(?), wakes up and finds that the game world has become real. And now he looked like character model he was about to discard when he fell asleep... a loli, more or less. Then he goes on to adventure, meet other players who were transported, find the other sages, fight off an evil, evil background plot and promote summoning magic in the world. From Vol 4 on, the LN plot may completely deviate from the WN plot, btw.

Edit: The cover art is to die for. So amazing.

Very much OP, no harem as such.

[Nelanlan]

^this talk of GB lolis reminded me of this. I found this recently and can't help but post this here. Also, I apologize if this offends anyone.
チラシの裏SS投稿掲示板

Synopsis borrowed from MadoSpicy TL: An elite businessman turned into magical loli SS officer working for the Imperial Reich in similar WW2 world. If you became a shooting squad and killed the prisoner, who is the one that kill the prisoner? MC answer: your commander, he the one who made the signal, not a single guilt given. A very-very rational guy who so rational that many questioned his humanity.

here is a pic of the MC

Spoiler for evil:

MadoSpicy TL has a link to the novel on their website if you have trouble finding it.

[travelingbum]

Originally Posted by Nelanlan

^this talk of GB lolis reminded me of this. I found this recently and can't help but post this here. Also, I apologize if this offends anyone.
チラシの裏SS投稿掲示板

幼女戦記

how did you get a SS site and story name mixed up

[cabman11]

Originally Posted by Nelanlan

^this talk of GB lolis reminded me of this. I found this recently and can't help but post this here. Also, I apologize if this offends anyone.
チラシの裏SS投稿掲示板

Synopsis borrowed from MadoSpicy TL: An elite businessman turned into magical loli SS officer working for the Imperial Reich in similar WW2 world. If you became a shooting squad and killed the prisoner, who is the one that kill the prisoner? MC answer: your commander, he the one who made the signal, not a single guilt given. A very-very rational guy who so rational that many questioned his humanity.

here is a pic of the MC

Spoiler for evil:

MadoSpicy TL has a link to the novel on their website if you have trouble finding it.

Oooooohhh this looks good.
And that art too.

Also I can't find the web novel link. If this even has one
Edit: nevermind found it
here