[Haigi]

Rant:

Spoiler:

I know stories are meant to be descriptive but...can't they be like:
It was a rosy red apple sitting on top a wooden table.

But in actual fact:
It was a plump rosy red apple dotted with sparkling droplets of water like transparent crystals with a thin stem attached to it along with a single luscious emerald green leaf on sitting on top of a simple yet elegant looking table made of deep mahogany wood with marble-line grain markings.


Would make lives so much better XD but at the same time less descriptive information for a mental image is bad.

It's a nightmare phrasing sentences that are multi-describing a single thing or action. How I wish I could put what my brain thinks into words... practice! practice!

Progress 2/9