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Originally Posted by DoomRavager

Except that TSFs don't use screens for display of HUD and outside views.

With that said, the kind of contrivance that would have to go into an Imperial Royal Guardsman nobody somehow ending up in or even accompanying a top secret UN task force that only draws from rigorously pre-screened candidates at Yokohama, on a mission where the plan explicitly arranged for them to do it alone, simply boggles the mind.

And TSFs deploying sentry turrets with bombs having yield a third of the size of a standard S-11? The XG-70's main guard unit somehow managing to end up on the "other side of the hive"? Granted, making up virtually impossible scenarios and breaking continuity willy-nilly is kind of par for the course where fanfiction in general is concerned, but.

For simplicity's sake, a tiny holographic(ish) screen beamed directly into your eye is still a screen.

How is Izumi being on the Valkyrie Squad a problem in canon, particularly she has UN connections through Yui and Yamashiro, Yuuhi is vouching for her from the Japan side, and she's in a final offensive mission where the rest of the squad are using exchanged Royal Guard Takemis? And isn't going from the Royal Guard to a special UN team precisely what happened when Yui was assigned to Project Prominence in canon?

As for everything else...

Spoiler:

The stuff with Meiya taking longer to get to the core, and the other Valkyries splitting up and getting picked off by BETA, and Takeru being by himself during the home stretch? That's... actually exactly what happens in the game. Chizuru and Kei go out doing the Synchronized Suicide Paddle and take a fuckload of BETA with them. Tama and Mikoto get run over by a Destroyer after they take down a Barrier-class. Takeru didn't even know Tama was dead until the Superior did his "HARR HARR HERE BE MY SOLDIER-CLASS MATERIALS" thing in the core.

btw, I specifically tried to write it so you can assume all of that stuff still happens and Izumi's presence doesn't interfere with the original plot structure. She's basically Mari Makinami, if Mari had been written into Rebuild 2.0 in a way that wasn't character-derailing and retarded.

I think you're testing me because you know I'm a secondary.