Chapter 5 (entitled Betrayal) of my fanfic will be released Tuesday afternoon. Has anyone besides me had difficulty coming up with a really good story for a betrayal? For some reason, I've had some trouble not making it cliche, which it is going to be anyway (fair warning). Just curious, write on!
For anyone who hasn't read them, you can catch the first four chapters here:
http://narutofic.org/viewstory.php?sid=7342
Lemme know what you think...enjoy!